Minggu, 30 Maret 2014






The way to write paragraphs with adequate and inadequate unity?

                       
  1. Paragraphs are combained sentence containing one central idra and supported  by explanotory ideas. the basic idea and idea of these discriptors should have a inform of intregation (cohesion) and the integration of meaning (coherence)
  1. Topic sentence is a sentence that describes the main idea/main idea of a paragraph .
    There is usually a topic sentence at the beginning/end/sometimes in the middle of a paragraph.
     
  1. Meaning coherence ( coherence )
    A coherent paragraph said , if there is cohesiveness between the ideas presented sentences to each other .The sentences have a mutual relationship and together discuss one main idea . Not found a single sentence that deviates from the main idea or leaps distracting
  1. Integration of Shape ( Cohesion )
    If the coherence associated with the content , the cohesion or coherency forms relating to the use of his words . It could be one of the main ideas put forward a paragraph , but not necessarily cohesive paragraphs that say if the words are not coherent .
     here the writer will give the example of a paragraph with adequate and inadequate and also coherence , this about " self describing " . Let 's enjoy to read !
  1. example paragraph coherence and cohesion:

       Apples ( Apple ) is one fruit that is very doubtful taste delights . ( b ) According to some research behind the delights of apple flavor it also contains many substances that are beneficial to our health . ( c ) For it is important to consume apples . ( d ) Apples contain vitamins , minerals and other elements such as fiber , fitokimian , baron , tannins , tartar acid , and others. ( e ) the content of such substances apple has the benefit that can prevent and cope with various diseases . ( f ) The following are some of the health benefits of apples that have been collected from various sources that apples can prevent asthma , can reduce weight , protects bones , lower cholesterol , prevent liver cancer , lung cancer , breast cancer , colon cancer , diabetes control , cleans and refreshes the mouth .

The sections on top of each other in discourse is meaningful is concerned , the above sentence describes in detail substances and benefits contained in apples . Discourse coherent discourse because it includes almost every sentence is meaningful in touch coherent with other parts . In addition , it is also cohesive discourse . There are some words that are repeated ( an apple in every sentence ) . So , it should be cohesive and discourse and koherensif . Even keterpaduanlah ( coherence ) that should be prioritized .

Senin, 24 Maret 2014



My life

My name is devi Intan Trisnawati I was born on 19 December 1993 I have a family that is very dear to me . but usually my friends call me by name devi  intan . I have a body shape that is quite ideal height and ideal body weight have straight hair and brown skin and eyes have turned and have an oval face shape with a slightly aquiline nose my children cheerful and have many friends . I am also very easy going and easy to adapt to other people and the surroundings . but I also shy person .
  as a woman also must have expertise that can cook it is also one of the talents that must be owned by a woman even though I am not so good at cooking , but I always learn to cook and be in like everyone else , in addition to cooking as a woman and a mother I am also a candidate must independent and can do all the work with ease .
   I live in the village sri basuki sb five lampung middle and I now ngekos d jl.38a
lampung east .
I used to go to school in SMA N 1 as white middle lampung I feel a lot could go to high school that I want, after I graduated high school I went to university I wanted first I was not sure I could get in or not because I have a lot of competition there are more and better dbanding me , but I keep the spirit for more advanced eventually even after I enroll in the university I want that Muhammadiyah university and I can fit into one of the students at the university I was very pleased...

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